Senin, 03 Juni 2013
HOW TO MAKE A GOOD PARAGRAPH? (with Thesis Statement) Part Two
INTRODUCTION Do you know the kinds of sleeping disorders? There are many kinds of sleeping disorder including insomnia, walking in the middle of sleep and screaming in the middle of sleep. Insomnia is a symptom of sleeping disorder caused by irregular sleeping patterns. Insomnia consists of two kinds; they are acute insomnia and chronic insomnia. Acute insomnia is a symptom that is most common and usually caused by situation such as stress at work, family problems and traumatic events. Whereas chronic insomnia consists of primary and secondary insomnia. Primary chronic insomnia is caused by change of life including prolonged stress and emotional impact, these symptom are more directed to the psychic. Secondary chronic insomnia is a side effect of health problem such as certain medical conditions, and the influence of drugs. Damaging healthy, decreasing life performance and changing in attitude and appearance are three drawbacks of insomnia. OUTLINE THESIS STATEMENT Damaging healthy, decreasing life performance and changing in attitude and appearance are three drawbacks of insomnia. A. TOPIC SENTENCE: The first drawback of insomnia is it can damage our health. 1. Increase diabetes. 2. Decrease the antibody. 3. Increase risk of cancer. B. TOPIC SENTENCE: The second drawback for people who get insomnia is it can decrease life performance. 1. Increase the stress. 2. Trigger anxiety. 3. Increase the desire for fatty snack foods. C. TOPIC SENTENCE: The last drawback of insomnia is changes in attitude and appearance. 1. Decline in thinking power. 2. Look older. 3. Change to be lazy person. CONCLUSION To sum up, insomnia isn’t a disease but insomnia is a sleeping disorder. Women have higher possibility than men to insomnia. To minimize drawbacks of insomnia you must get enough sleeping time, take some sports, minimize alcohol and cigarettes consumption, try to reduce foods or drinks that contain caffeine, and drink two liters per day of mineral water to keep our bodies still in the pink.
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